SPL2.2 Writing a Personal Narrative Draft

 Name: James Joshua Padua Date Submitted: Dec/2/2024

Section: 12-MARLHES                 Teacher: richard john Lugtu


PERSONAL NARRATIVE DRAFT

Topic: Current Romance?

Title:  Love isn’t blind, I was

Thesis: Misguided by a misfortune, but what happens at the past doesn’t dictate the future


Paragraph 1

Topic Sentence: I’ve gone through an unfortunate event that shifted my viewpoint for “Love”

Supporting Details:

  1. Met someone whom i thought was the missing piece

  2. Things aren’t actually what they seem

  3. Those event affect how i view things today


Paragraph 2

Topic Sentence: “what is essential is invisible to the eye”

Supporting Details:

  1. Met someone new, Except she isn’t actually new. It’s just, it’s my first time meeting who she really was.

  2. She was completely different, and as an agnostic, once again I knelt down and prayed “she was different”.

  3. Her actions say i was right, and i wish that till the end — i’ll still be right.


Conclusion: With her i learned that “love” isn't made just only to be the the definition for absence of hate, rather it was the thing that makes us human.

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